Mark Colgan

February 15, 2024

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How I'd Rewrite 5 Cold Emails To Get More Replies

Want to get more replies with your cold emails?

In this video I walkthrough why these 5 emails failed to get a response and how I’d approach rewriting them.

At the end I shared more tips on how you can approach writing cold emails.

The message copy is only one factor that influences the success of a cold email campaign – and a lot of people struggle with the messaging.

Please note, I did my best to anonymise the senders as this isn’t about bringing negativity to hard working sales people and companies.

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